I think she looks great! It is a very nice natural look and I love the eyes and lip colors. They are beautiful and so is your model!
Like gildedangel said, I would make the liner a little thicker. Also, I noticed parts of her face are very light, like on her forehead and cheeks. Maybe darken up those spots and even out the skin tone, and maybe even powder her face to get rid of some of the shine.
Besides that, it's nice. And good luck!!