I think there's a bit of dark silver here on the eyes. Try really packing Carbon eyeshadow on close to the lashline and take up to just where the lid ends, then where the Carbon ends (just below the socketline), put some dark pewter/silver eyeshadow across the line and b-l-e-n-d it all together. Don't know a good dark Mac silver to recommend, I always stick to my Bourjouis gris pailettes or my Milani Mercury - the only Mac silver I have is Idol Eyes, which is light and purplish, but that would work OK for this too....
What you need after that is lots of kohl, top and bottom of eye, then lots more blending....
What I like best here actually is her hair.