This look is very pretty and soft, I like it. I would suggest carrying the color you have in the inner corner all the way along the lower lashline to better define the eye. For softer looks, ultra-blended is great. I like to do more contrast with my colors but my looks can be a bit bolder. Overall I think this is very pretty and you've done a nice job.
Agreed on the all caps, it means you're SHOUTING, which can be a bit off-putting for some.
Welcome aboard, I've learned so much on this forum!