cute tutorial, i think the look came out very tropically, it is something i'd recreate. For constructive criticism, if you are going to play a song loop it or make sure that it is as long as the tutorial. Some of your words at the bottom were too small to see.
In my opinion, I'd rather here you talk during your tut than hear music, just because I like to hear other people's tips and their voice to go along with it. but other than those personal preferences I think you did a good job.
Oh and one last thing, your lighting was a little wonky and there were extra shadows. Try a light in front of you behind the camera, not blinding bright, but well enough to get rid of some of the shadows. Is this your first video tutorial? I haven't had the time to do one but it looks like fun!