I agree with the nude lipstick suggestion - it doesn't have to be totally nude, maybe a pastel pink shade instead of something so bright and glossy?
Also, what are you using to apply your blush? I don't mean to sound harsh but could it be that it's a bit blotchy? Did you put some of the blush onto your nosebridge as well and on your chin? I see like a square or blush constellation on the face which looks a bit funny. I would suggest using the 187 brush to apply the blush lightly onto your cheekbones, and blend it out well. Also, your skin has reddish undertones, maybe try to balance it out with a foundation or concealer in some areas.
Other than that good job, and I'm sure your looks will only improve over time.