YES, much better IMO
Dont forget to use a lighter shade right under the brows to highlight them so that they stand out. I think you did in this pic but its kinda hard to see.
Your doing great girl, keep posting!
The liner is better on your right eye than the left eye, are you right handed?
A little trick I use when I draw liner on my left eye is that I actually start at the outside corner and work into the middle. Then I start from the inside corner of the eye and go to the middle. I find that my lines are smoother when I work from the outside in on my left eye esp. when I do cat eyes.
The shadow colour combo is very nice. What's strange is that I can see the difference in colours when your eyes are open but they seem to blend in with each other and look like one colour when your eyes are closed.
Practice makes perfect!! It's good to see you practicing!